I like it.
I recommend putting in the psytrance rolling bass. It'll give it more of a psytrance feel. Also, there's a vst effect called 'D Blue Glitch' It's free for download & use. It adds a nice element to psytrance.
Over all, you're doing a great job & I can't wait to hear the finished song. :)
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